http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gqB0A-Ss5xc

Suss it out! Let me know what you think! :o)

A lot of great in there... but a whole lot of shit too. The whole last part is pure garbage (with the steps and the dude just saying put red dots on everything). The music volume is way to high over the audio... however, regardless of volume the last part is just pure crap.

I liked the first part a lot... a little excessive on the rack city though. I understand a hook or even some sort of break between verses... but in my opinion it is a little too much.

> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gqB0A-Ss5xc
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CA Bros need to know!


> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gqB0A-Ss5xc
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> Suss it out! Let me know what you think! :o)
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But you've got some great moves son.
Have to agree with SilentAce some though. The last bit seemed awfully forced and dissonant from the first part, and even your dancing seemed off and corny in it.

Keep that shit up, it's good, but try to settle on a more cohesive style/look, or make the transitions between "styles" a little more fluid.


All work and no play makes me..., well, you know the rest.